There is no doubt that Rod Harder’s talent is writing
descriptive writing but the length of this story doesn’t give him many words to
do this in. This story could be greatly improved if Rod had drawn it out a
little bit more. The characters are thin and I got a bit confused. There seems
to be four characters mentioned in the book but there is no real attention paid
to any of them and the erotic content is kept short and flows too quickly for
you to get a sense of what it happening. However, I’m positive that Rod Harder
has great potential.
(2/5 Stars)
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