This short story is an improvement from the last one I read
by Rod Harder. Although still short this story is longer than the four page
erotic story I previously read which allowed Rod to put more detail into his
writing, however, I would personally prefer a little bit more.
The use of dialogue worked well in this book to add a bit
more depth to the characters and helps to absorb the reader into the story but
the characters are still rather thin and a longer book would allow the reader
to connect more with the characters and overall create a more successful book.
There is still a lot of room for improvement (especially on the editing side of
things) but this is an ok story that shows potential.
(3/5 Stars)
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