There is no doubt that Rod Harder’s talent is writing descriptive writing but the length of this story doesn’t give him many words to do this in. This story could be greatly improved if Rod had drawn it out a little bit more. The characters are thin and I got a bit confused. There seems to be four characters mentioned in the book but there is no real attention paid to any of them and the erotic content is kept short and flows too quickly for you to get a sense of what it happening. However, I’m positive that Rod Harder has great potential.