Sunday, 16 December 2012

Review: "The Tycoon's Lonely Queen on New Years" by Rod Harder

The Tycoon's Lonely Queen on New YearsThis short story is an improvement from the last one I read by Rod Harder. Although still short this story is longer than the four page erotic story I previously read which allowed Rod to put more detail into his writing, however, I would personally prefer a little bit more.

The use of dialogue worked well in this book to add a bit more depth to the characters and helps to absorb the reader into the story but the characters are still rather thin and a longer book would allow the reader to connect more with the characters and overall create a more successful book. There is still a lot of room for improvement (especially on the editing side of things) but this is an ok story that shows potential.

(3/5 Stars)

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